This has to me a soft, dreamy and yet decisive tone, and you clearly keep to Harry's characterization and motives. Which is awesome. Dumbledore is also Dumbledore here gently manipulative and with the goal of greatest good firmly in mind but also not cruel or even intentionally mean. Which is difficult to get right. And it really has an ensnaring ending paragraph.
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Date: 2015-08-13 05:20 pm (UTC)And it really has an ensnaring ending paragraph.